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Seems like a practical demonstration is in order! :blum2:

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The continuity of this from the last page is pretty confusing. Was he dreaming the last page? Or was this a dream he had that night after their encounter? If it was all a dream why did it jump from the mom straddling Dash to bomber fucking her? Anyway, I just wanna see Helen and Dash get it on but felt this was a weird hiccup. 

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The continuity of this from the last page is pretty confusing. Was he dreaming the last page? Or was this a dream he had that night after their encounter? If it was all a dream why did it jump from the mom straddling Dash to bomber fucking her? Anyway, I just wanna see Helen and Dash get it on but felt this was a weird hiccup. 

It's my fault. I jumped the gun here.  The writer, who is great by the way, wrote the scene straight, where Dash freezes and Helen interjects. However, in my perverted colored glass spectrum, I saw this scene sexed up some.  I need to stop doing that because I now see the confusion it causes.  My bad.

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